Could you correct my CV, please?
Hi,
I’m writing my CV and because English is not my first language I struggle with my job duties, skills and interests sectors. This is what I’m planning to write, could You check it and correct any mistakes (not only grammar), please? Maybe I should write it all in other tense? Thank You for all the advice and help.
JOBS DUTIES:
Sales and stock management
- Maintaining and developing relationships with business and individual customers via telephone calls and emails.
- Researching the market and related products.
- Management of all aspects of design, development and promotion the websites.
- Distributing female product to Polish customers.
- Record Keeping.
- Assisting clients in all aspects of their care needs (social, emotional, personal).
- Medicine Administrating.
- Daily record keeping.
Preparing stock for sale.
- Cash register operating
- Offering friendly and helpful service to customers.
- All aspects of conducting business such as ordering goods, serving customers, accounting.
OTHER SKILLS
Good knowledge of standard office software, including e-mail and the internet.
Translation from English into Polish (excellent verbal and written communication skills).
Web design & development using ecommerce software.
Product photography and picture editing skills.
Google tools user (Webmaster, Analytics, Adwords, Merchant Centre, Picasa).
I am self-motivated and hard working person. Very keen and enthusiastic to learn new skills. I work well with other people as well as work in my own initiative. I always give one hundred percent of my skills, energy and experience in my job. In my free time I love to spend time with my family. Watching my son grow and develop is the most rewarding experience in my life.
What I paste in here is not my CV, there are some sentences I struggle with and do not know how to write it correctly. I do not need help with content of my CV only with checking the errors 
Thanks a lot
Hi, Thanks for your help. Yes, I need those skills for the job…
August 7th, 2010 at 1:02 pm
Here are my suggestions:
Management of all aspects of design, development and promotion the websites.
- should be: Management of all aspects with regards to design, development and promotion via websites.
Medicine Administrating
- should be: Administering of medicine.
Cash register operating
-should be: Operating of the cash register.
Offering friendly and helpful service to customers.
- should be: Providing good customer service when required.
Good knowlege of standard office software, including e-mail and internet
-should be: Proven skills in MS office.
Translation from English into Polish (excellent verbal and written communication skills).
Web design & development using ecommerce software.
Product photography and picture editing skills.
Google tools user (Webmaster, Analytics, Adwords, Merchant Centre, Picasa).
- leave these out unless you require these skills in the job that you are applying for.
I am self-motivated and hard working person. Very keen and enthusiastic to learn new skills. I work well with other people as well as work in my own initiative. I always give one hundred percent of my skills, energy and experience in my job.
I would change this to :
Am a self-motivated, hardworking, enthusiastic individual who enjoys learning new skils. I work well either in a team or as independent worker. In addition, I am truly committed to achieving the best standard for any job that needs to be completed.
Leave out this out of the CV: I give In my free time I love to spend time with my family. Watching my son grow and develop is the most rewarding experience in my life.
Hope this helps.